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I started watching Fluffy Paradise.

It's adorable.

Or it would be, if I could ignore the less than fluffy elephant in the room of our main character not actually being a precocious toddler but a nearly thirty-year-old woman.

It feels weird. It would honestly feel less weird if it was fetish, but, as the show presents it, this is just how Neema acts? It's unsettling to be reminded that this is an adult, at least Mushoku Tensei leans into how unsettling it would be for an adult to be trapped in a toddler's body. Fluffy Paradise glosses over the problem and wants the audience to ignore the plot in favor of ultra kawaii mofu mofu scenes.

So what's the point of it being an isekai? What's the point of our main character being an adult office worker turned toddler?

I mean, I know, it's because the show is based on a web novel and web novels have to appeal to the people who read web novels and the all powerful algorithm of syosetu where those web novels are often posted.

But at that point the cash grab aspect of adding isekai has just made what could be a fun adorable story worse.

I also started watching The Wrong Way to use Healing Magic.

Which is amazing.

Honestly it's probably my favorite original this season, if only for the fact that the popular, talented kids are just nice regular kids. I spent the entire first episode (and part of the second) waiting for the rug-pull where one of these #blessed characters was a total asshole to Usato for no reason other than that they think of themselves as superior. The fact that it doesn't seem like that's going to happen is such a refreshing relief that I felt tension I didn't know I was holding onto seep out of my body.

But I still think this show would've been better if it wasn't an isekai.

Even though this show has purpose behind it's isekai premise, and goals that are set up because it's an isekai, even with that part of the premise being deeply intertwined with the rest of the plot.

It would just work better if it wasn't an isekai.

Why couldn't Usato, Suzune, and Kazuki just be people from this world? I think it would offer more depth to the setting if the characters were coming into it with their own biases and preconceived notions from having been raised in this world. The title implies that someone thinks this is "The wrong way to use healing magic," and I feel like there's a loss when that is just applied to the audience or possible side characters who haven't been properly introduced yet. There's just a lot more meat on those world building bones if Usato comes into this as someone who already understands healing magic from the perspective of a person living in that fantasy world.

And there's a lot more meat on the bones of Suzune and Kazuki's stories if they aren't default heroes but decide to become heroes.

Isekai is becoming a crutch, but I don't actually blame creators for leaning on it. It's clear the industry has decided that anything with isekai or video game world building is going to be a default success, but this ouroboros is dying as it devours itself. The market is saturated and isekai has become a groan inducing term.

I like isekai when the fact that it is an isekai is not only crucial to the plot, characters, and world building, but enhances all those things.

Ascendance of a Bookworm wouldn't work as well if it weren't an isekai. Even if Myne were an unparalleled genius blessed by Mestionora the goddess of wisdom the fact that she's a weirdo who doesn't understand the world she lives in is an important part of how her character interacts with others and the world around her.

Even the currently airing, and fun, but bland, Tsukimichi works well with it's isekai premise. The entire plot hinges on travel between worlds being a thing that exists and gods who can overpower humans interfering when they see fit. It makes use of the premise to set up how the world works and how the characters behave.

If the work isn't doing that then it's probably secretly a better work wearing a bad isekai mask.

I hope that as the bubble bursts not only do more stories have the confidence to step away from the isekai genre, but more writers who want to try their hand at it actually lean into the tropes that make the genre worthwhile.

I just want more enjoyable anime tbh.

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I actually made it again today! I'm super happy about it, now if only I could get my sleep schedule on track so I'm not writing at the last minute before midnight...
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I'm working on getting back into the swing of things after taking those two days off. I'm glad I managed to get the work I wanted done today.

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Jan. 13th, 2022 10:23 pm
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Yesterday was a terrible day, today was moderately better but I was still exhausted from all of that. A couple of days off isn't going to hurt my goal!
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Another day, another drop in the bucket!
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Working on the little empress again. My stomach hasn't been feeling great today, but I got this done!
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Woo-hoo!

I finally figured out how I want to start The Past Divides, The Future Provides! I've been stuck on this fic for months now! It's going to be a behemoth of a fic anyways, but it's one I want to write so badly. The entire thing is completely self-indulgent. WangXian get to raise babies together, Sizhui, Jin Ling, Jingyi, and Zizhen all get to live the happiest lives. Wen Ning gets to be a badass. Wen Qing is there.


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whew! I wrote a decent amount today! I didn't plan to write this much and I think what I wrote is probably going to need a ton of editing so I haven't been posting excerpts, but for once I'm actually just writing to write the damn thing and not trying to write it perfectly the first time (as if that's a thing that can really be done, even if you edit as you go you're still editing). I'm really happy with where this fic is going. I sort of wish I was working on my MDZS fics, but this 2ha fic is just so damn cute and fluffy it's stolen my heart. Mo Ran and Chu Wanning deserve to have a happy second chance in every life!
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I worked more on my 2ha au The Little Empress I almost forgot to write at all today after I slept too late and goofed off all day. I did watch Encanto though and it was really sweet.
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New 2ha WIP not on the list yet, I don't have a full title yet but the working one is The Little Empress, I don't think that will be the official title since it doesn't really fit with the full story, just the first few chapters.

A basic summary would be: After his Chu-fei's death, Emperor Taxian-jun found himself unable to die, unable to be killed he felt as though he were cursed to live in this world where the last flame of his life was forever extinguished. However one day ten years after Chu Wanning's death a green sprout grew from his grave. 100 years later the haitang tree which grew from Chu Wanning's grave gave birth to his reincarnation. In this life Mo Ran vows to love and respect his most precious person.


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A Haunting

This is my Naruto, Madara and Hashirama are haunting Naruto and Sasuke respectively AU. I saw a nice Naruto meta on how Hashirama seems more like the talented genius who just has powers appear when convenient and Madara seems more like the hard worker, making them more like their opposites in reincarnation so I felt compelled to work on this old AU again.


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578/400

Jan. 4th, 2022 09:36 pm
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Rescind

Decided to work on this oneshot, and now I hope to get it published by the end of the month after some editing.


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And They Were Roommates?

Worked on this fic today. I'm writing very loose chapters right now, but I'm getting a better idea of how this fic is going to start since I really only have the ending planned.

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I want to take my writing more seriously so I'm going to try and hold myself accountable to my resolution to write at least 400 words a day, and to hopefully finish the things I write every so often. I'm going to post updates on what I'm writing every week and what I've written every day! This particular post is going to be a collection of all my current WIPs (whether they'll be written this year or not), so it'll be long compared to future posts, but here they are:

WIPs:

WIPs... )

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Feb. 28th, 2021 01:08 am
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Just a first post, it's weird getting back to the LJ style of posting after years on Tumblr.

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